The Invisible man 
Just minutes before, everything had been completely normal. He had sat eating his breakfast at the kitchen table, as he did every day of his life.
It was only when he looked in the mirror that he realised something was wrong. For several seconds he had a sick feeling grew in his stomach. His mouth felt dry and he started to sweat as he sprinted from room to room, trying in vain to find a reflection.
How could this have happened? Of all days, why did it have to be today? This was the most important day of his life.
He could stiil it the best day of his life he took advantage of this hehehehehe. He started watching new and he saw people talking about a bank how it’s one of the biggest bank in the world it was called Atlantic bank of new york. It was gonna be his first heist.
It was gonna be a big heist he had to plan this out first he will walk in from the front door next he will cover the cameras and had to block. It was really hard it was like opening a jar of cold pickles.
. later he got a old rusty drill and he drilled through the safe and there was a big problem he couldn’t just leave they will see the bag floating away. He ran with the money on top of the building someone saw him run and he pushed the emergency button code red red .
there were police helicopters they didn’t know what to shoot nothing was there the invisible man ran back but they were police officers coming up he panicked he left the money the ground and ran to the corner the police officer were weird it out they took the money back to the bank and the helicopters.
He followed the officers and he knocked them down and ran again and this time he jumped of and he had a glider and he glided all the way down and he landed really hard he started walking slow that he thought that he was about to be pass out.
Later he made it home and he was rich now hooray
THE END
great use of similes and ajectives and good description
ReplyDeletefeedford:try to use the five senses